Hi, Sara. Your article is amazing! You should consider writing for Medium's publications. "An Injustice" might be an excellent fit for similar articles in the future.

Your writing is great, but please review Medium's formatting guide... There are a few things to consider, such as using a subtitle, crediting the image, etc.

I strongly suggest reviewing Zulie Rane's Youtube channel - she's the reason I learned how to format articles. I'm not affiliated with her, I'm just grateful for her videos.

Here's one about editing:


Casey Botticello also created a great formatting guide, here's his article:


I would love to read more stories from you. Good luck with writing!

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